A Tale of Two Scripts

I’ve been recalibrating a script – basically from the ground up – and thought it might be interesting for you guys to see the first page of each and how very different they are! So, BEHOLD.

To the left, you have the old version. To the right, the new. Odds are pretty good that I’ll cannibalize this or that from the old version and slide it into the new one, but even though the characters are exactly the same and the basic plot isn’t changing… It’s obviously a very large move.